Friday, 31 March 2017

Menelepedia vs Camo jumping spider

Walt: write narrative using descriptive language.
Once there was a Insect named Menelepedia. She was taking a stroll for her morning exercise. She was walking around the forest and saying hi to her neighbors.

Suddenly she was still saying bye to a neighbor when suddenly she bumped into the Camo jumping spider. He was furious. “Watch where you are going girl I will hurt you” said the spider. “It wasn’t my fault” said Menelepedia. “You are gonna get hurt now” said the spider. “Oh no”.

“Wait, wait I’m sorry I don’t want to get hurt I’m sorry” said Menelepedia. “Hmm ok then I accept your apology, you’re lucky” said the spider. “Go run before I change my mind” said the spider. “Thank you so much” said Menelepedia. After that she ran home to get to safety.

Task Description:
I had to write a narrative about my spider and my insect fighting.after I finished my writing I had to post it on my blog. I had to pot it on my blog with a title, Walt, task description and labels. feel free to leave a comment on my blog I hope you enjoy.


  1. I really liked you're narrative tory because you used many narrative words.
    Keep it up!

    1. Hi Joseph thank you so much for your great comment. your stories are really good as well. Keep up the great work on your blog and thank you for the comment.