Picture book Narrative

Once on a normal day Makayla and her seven minions were called into the NASA space HQ. Their boss Mr Sommerville told them they had to go to space to check the 8 planets in our solar system. “Ok let’s get ready then” said Makayla. So Makayla and her seven minions got ready to go to space.

“This is the rocket you are flying on. It is the fastest rocket for our space station. Here you go get in and fly out of here” said Mr Sommerville. So Makayla and the minions got into the rocket, and got ready to blast off. Countdown 10 9 8 7 6 5 4 3 2 1 BLAST OFF!

“Well here's Mercury the teeny weeny planet of all. Let’s go check on it” Said Makayla. “Wow this place is very small. I need to sit down, OUCH my bum is hot. You dumb bum” said Makayla. “I don’t like this planet it’s way too hot” said a minion. “Let’s go to Venus instead” Said Makayla. So Makayla and the minions got into the rocket, and got ready to blast off. Countdown 10 9 8 7 6 5 4 3 2 1 BLAST OFF!

“Ok here’s Venus the second planet from the sun. I kinda like it” Said Makayla, “ok then let’s go check this baby out” said a minion. “Hey did you know that this is the hottest planet in our solar system” Said Makayla. “Wow this is really boring it is really hot and tiring I need to lie down, OWWWWWWW” Said a minion, “LET’S go I don’t like this stupid planet” Said a  minion. So Makayla and the minions got into the rocket, and got ready to blast off. Countdown 10 9 8 7 6 5 4 3 2 1 BLAST OFF!

“Oh Earth We don’t need to check it” Said Makayla. So Makayla and the minions got into the rocket, and got ready to blast off. Countdown 10 9 8 7 6 5 4 3 2 1 BLAST OFF!

“Wow Mars is so Red, no wonder why it’s called the Red planet because in the sky it appears as a red star” Said a minion. “This planet’s great I really like it” Said Makayla. “Ulala Somebody has a crush” said a minion, “Shut up you dummy” Makayla replied. “Oh well let’s go and check on big mama Jupiter” Said a minion. So Makayla and the minions got into the rocket, and got ready to blast off. Countdown 10 9 8 7 6 5 4 3 2 1 BLAST OFF!

So Makayla and her seven minions went in their rocket to the next plent which was Jupiter. “Ok here’s Jupiter let’s check this big mama out” Said a minion. “Wow Jupiter is so big” Said Makayla. I wonder how big this storm is, It must be really bad” Said a minion. “Well I guess we can go to the next planet” Said a minion. So Makayla and the minions got into the rocket, and got ready to blast off. Countdown 10 9 8 7 6 5 4 3 2 1 BLAST OFF!

“So apparently our next trip is to Saturn, let’s check it out” said Makayla. So Makayla and the minions went to check on Saturn. “Oooh I like it’s rings they're really pretty” Said a minion. “Well we can’t go on it because if we stand on it we will fall all the way into the planet, suffering higher temperatures and pressures until you get crushed inside the planet” Said a minion. So Makayla and the minions got into the rocket, and got ready to blast off. Countdown 10 9 8 7 6 5 4 3 2 1 BLAST OFF!

“Yay we’re going to my favorite planet, Uranus” shouted Makayla. So Makayla and the minions went to check on Uranus. “We can’t go on it though because if we land our spacecraft on Uranus then we will fall all the way into the liquid icy center” said Makayla. “So I guess it’s looks normal and great, let’s go to the next planet” Shouted a minion. So Makayla and the minions got into the rocket, and got ready to blast off. Countdown 10 9 8 7 6 5 4 3 2 1 BLAST OFF!

“Ok to be honest I can’t wait to visit Neptune it is a great and beautiful planet I really love the color” said a minion. So Makayla and the minions went to visit Neptune. “Wow it is really beautiful” said Makayla, “But that’s stink that we can’t stand on it, it’s so pretty” said a minion. “Ok then let’s go home we checked out the other planets it’s time to go back home my friends” said Makayla. So Makayla and the minions got into the rocket, and got ready to blast off. Countdown 10 9 8 7 6 5 4 3 2 1 BLAST OFF!

“Look there’s Earth we’re nearly home guys” said a minion. “I can’t wait to go and tell Mr Sommerville that we checked on all the planets and they were great” said Makayla. So Makayla and the minions waited for the rocket to land back on Earth so they could see their family and friends and tell them how their trip was. After this day Makayla and the minions told their friends and family and they were so amazed.

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Space Narrative

It is 4017, Makayla and her personal buddy Greg the talking monkey are on a mission to look for a planet for the people of earth to live on. They have to find a planet because earth is dying and they need a new home. They have been flying for three weeks and they haven’t got any luck, what are they going to do?

Suddenly they found the planet they were looking for. They started to explore the planet to see if it was safe for their people. But then they saw some dangerous obstacles that they had to try and get through. So her and Greg decided that they have to try and make these obstacles less dangerous and more safe for families. So they were trying to think of an idea to make the obstacles easier and less dangerous for families and also little ones.

“Greg what are we going to do? These obstacles are way too dangerous for all the families” said Makayla. Suddenly Greg came up with a great idea. “We should try and find the best way around to make the trail more easier to pass” he said, “I don’t know Greg what if there is no more ways what if they are more dangerous” Said Makayla. “What if we try and chop down the obstacles, like we can chop down the spiky tree branches, we could make a path, or we can make our own way to the other side” she said. “YYEEAAHH we should find another way around” said Greg.

So Makayla and Greg walked around to look for another way around this small river. “Hey Makayla there is another path over there” pointed Greg, “oh yes I can see it, let’s go over there” said Makayla. So they went and ran to the other path. “This path is great, it’s not dangerous, it’s stable and more safer for families and there are no aliens here” said Greg. “Let’s go back home and tell the boss that we’ve found the right planet” said Makayla, “yeah your right, wait hang on what’s this planet called?” asked Greg. “Oh it’s called Makomi” replied Makayla. “Cool let’s go tell the boss” said Greg.

Makayla and Greg have landed on earth again. “Hello boss we have found a great planet, it is called Makomi” said Greg. “Ohh that’s great we’ll call all the presidents and the prime ministers to evacuate all their country to America for free. They can just use the planes without any fair tickets. Few days later, “ok everyone we will be moving to a safer planet named Makomi. You will be guided to the planet in a rocket ship, then we will take you to your new houses. But the houses aren’t flash because we are still trying to build the houses.

                                                                     The End

Menelepedia vs Camo jumping spider

Walt: write narrative using descriptive language.

Once there was a Insect named Menelepedia. She was taking a stroll for her morning exercise. She was walking around the forest and saying hi to her neighbors.

Suddenly she was still saying bye to a neighbor when suddenly she bumped into the Camo jumping spider. He was furious. “Watch where you are going girl I will hurt you” said the spider. “It wasn’t my fault” said Menelepedia. “You are gonna get hurt now” said the spider. “Oh no”.

“Wait, wait I’m sorry I don’t want to get hurt I’m sorry” said Menelepedia. “Hmm ok then I accept your apology, you’re lucky” said the spider. “Go run before I change my mind” said the spider. “Thank you so much” said Menelepedia. After that she ran home to get to safety.

Task Description:
I had to write a narrative about my spider and my insect fighting.after I finished my writing I had to post it on my blog. I had to pot it on my blog with a title, Walt, task description and labels. feel free to leave a comment on my blog I hope you enjoy.

My narrative about space

Space Breakdown

By Makayla

Walt: write a narrative

Walt: demonstrate understanding of a number of strategies and skills for writing (for example, use of paragraphs, a range of sentence types, descriptive language, punctuation, spelling).

How do you think this space trip will end good or bad? One day Meliana was driving to her job as an astronaut for NASA, once she got to work she went into her office and put down her stuff. She had got called to the boss’s office and got told that she was going to the moon.

Task Description: We had to write a narrative about outer space. Then we had to post it on our blog with a Task description,Walt,title,labels,picture and a link to go to my whole story. Please enjoy my story.

If you liked this story here is a link to the whole story

Teuila and the great white shark

Teuila’s heart was pounding as she was being chased by a great white shark. She was exhausted from swimming so hard, but she knew that as a warrior she could do anything to escape situations like this. Teuila had a lifetime ahead of her and she didn’t want to die.

But the problem was that she was swimming far away from her tribal village. She knew she had to escape from the shark but she also knew that she had to get back quickly to her village. She thought that someone could see her but no one had noticed that she was gone.

Suddenly the shark gave up and she swam away.  Teuila spotted an island in the distance. Limping out of the water she noticed that she had a very bad cut on her leg. She found two sticks and used them as walking sticks.

After what seemed like a long time, Teuila found a little hut in a small village. She barged in and looked for someone to help her. An old lady said “Hello are you ok?” “No I have hurt my leg badly and I need to fix it” said Teuila. “Oh sure I can help you” said the old lady as she helped Teuila. After a long time it was starting to get dark. The old lady said “Oh no there is a storm about to hit”. “What? No! There can’t be! I have to get home!” Teuila said.

“Go to sleep and we will get you home tomorrow” said the old lady. The next morning Teuila woke up to a village that looked like it had been destroyed. “Oh my goodness that storm must of been big” said Teuila. The old lady said “Yes, yes it was”. Suddenly the old lady said that her grandson had a boat, and that he could take her home. “Why thank you. Now I can see my family again” said Teuila gratefully.

“TEUILA where were you?” said Teuila’s mum. “Sorry mum it’s a long story”. “I’m so happy that I’m back” Teuila said. She explained how she had been chased by a shark, getting lost and then surviving a storm. Her family were so relieved to hear that she was ok. That night, Teuila’s family made a huge feast to welcome her back. Then they lived happily ever after.

Task Description:This is my narrative story about my Maori or pacific warrior Teuila. I also have a image of her in the village. She is with the old lady that helped her.

Monster character description

Walt: write a character description.

Task description:We had to describe the image of the characters. I didn't create these characters I am just describing them from my ideas. So I don't know if they are like what I said.

Retelling the three little pigs

WALT:Retell a story

Far far away, there were three little pigs. They lived with their mother, but one day they had to leave home to find somewhere else to live. They found a wonderful place near a beautiful gleaming waterfall.

That day the three little pigs started to build their houses. The 1st little pig built his house out of straw. The 2nd little pig built his house out of sticks. Last of all the 3rd pig, the smartest and most hardworking of the three little pigs,  built his house out of bricks.

Suddenly a big bad hungry wolf came and threatened the 1st pig to let him in,”little pigs little pigs let me in” said the big bad wolf. “Not by the hair of my chinny chin chin” said the 1st pig. Then suddenly the big bad wolf said “I’ll huff I’ll puff and I will blow your house down.

But then the wolf blew down his house,”ahhhh bro let me in a wolf is on my back. “Hurry get in” said the 2nd pig. Suddenly the wolf came “little pigs little pigs let me in”, “not by the hair of our chinny chin chins”. “I will huff I'll puff and I will blow your house down”. Then they ran to the 3rd pigs house “let us in let us in”, “ok come in” said the 3rd pig “hurry lock the door” said the 2 pigs. “The big bad wolf is on our back”said the 1st pig.

“little pig little pigs let me in”, ”not by the hair of our chinny chin chins”. “Okay I’ll huff I’ll puff and I’ll blow your house down” said the big bad wolf. But the wolf could not blow the house down.

Suddenly the wolf climbed up the chimney. Then the 3rd pig turned his oven, on and the wolf came down and burnt his bottom. “Owwwww” and the wolf popped out of the chimney and never came back ever again.

THE END!!

Task description: We had to retell a short narrative story of the three little pigs

My narrative

On a nice sunny day there was a girl named Ella at school. She was learning chemistry until suddenly she saw a crack in the earth, she was shocked. But then she told he friends and their hearts were pounding.

Suddenly one of her friends thought that they can get help from their teacher and save the world. At lunchtime Ella and her friends went to talk to her teacher,but her teacher could not help them. “Oh no everybody’s panicking” said Ella.

“We got to get them calmed down” said Ella. “ wait how is there a crack in the earth. “oohh it was me because this morning I was fighting with my mum and I said I hate my life” I must of hurt the earth’s felling and it might be teaching me a lesson.

“You should say sorry to your mum and love your life again then it will stop” said Ella’s friend “ Yeah I guess so” said Ella. Then Ella and her friends went to talk to her mum and Ella said sorry. Then they lived happily ever after. The End