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Tuesday, 9 May 2017

First netball game for 2017

Today the 9th of May was my first netball game for 2017 with my netball team, The Stingrays. We played against Dio Topaz, they were tall and quite hard but I tried my best to do my position great.


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Thursday, 3 March 2016

Retelling the three little pigs

WALT:Retell a story
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Far far away, there were three little pigs. They lived with their mother, but one day they had to leave home to find somewhere else to live. They found a wonderful place near a beautiful gleaming waterfall.


That day the three little pigs started to build their houses. The 1st little pig built his house out of straw. The 2nd little pig built his house out of sticks. Last of all the 3rd pig, the smartest and most hardworking of the three little pigs,  built his house out of bricks.


Suddenly a big bad hungry wolf came and threatened the 1st pig to let him in,”little pigs little pigs let me in” said the big bad wolf. “Not by the hair of my chinny chin chin” said the 1st pig. Then suddenly the big bad wolf said “I’ll huff I’ll puff and I will blow your house down.


But then the wolf blew down his house,”ahhhh bro let me in a wolf is on my back. “Hurry get in” said the 2nd pig. Suddenly the wolf came “little pigs little pigs let me in”, “not by the hair of our chinny chin chins”. “I will huff I'll puff and I will blow your house down”. Then they ran to the 3rd pigs house “let us in let us in”, “ok come in” said the 3rd pig “hurry lock the door” said the 2 pigs. “The big bad wolf is on our back”said the 1st pig.
“little pig little pigs let me in”, ”not by the hair of our chinny chin chins”. “Okay I’ll huff I’ll puff and I’ll blow your house down” said the big bad wolf. But the wolf could not blow the house down.


Suddenly the wolf climbed up the chimney. Then the 3rd pig turned his oven, on and the wolf came down and burnt his bottom. “Owwwww” and the wolf popped out of the chimney and never came back ever again.

THE END!!

Task description: We had to retell a short narrative story of the three little pigs

Friday, 26 February 2016

Superhero Romeo

Walt: write stories with a complete orientation, problem, and resolution

Once upon a time there was a superhero named Romeo. He lived in a super flying castle by himself, he liked to go to the park to watch kids play. Sometimes it gives him memories from when he was small.


Suddenly the super phone rang and someone was in trouble. But then his enemy appeared and brainwashed him,then he forgot that someone was in trouble. Then Romeo’s enemy hung up the phone.

“Oh no” said Romeo’s assistant Ella,Romeo You have to go someone’s in trouble. “Who,Where,What” said Romeo. Go to Central city mall someone's stealing a woman's bag. Suddenly Romeo forgot to put his suit on,then Ella told Romeo to stop and put his suit on. “Oh whoops sorry” said Romeo,then off went Romeo to save the day.


Then suddenly super magician Mele came. “who are you” said Romeo, “don’t you remember me I’m super magician Mele”. Hang on I’m going to ring Ella. “HEY how do you know Ella, “Romeo I’m your partner” said Mele. Suddenly Ella told Mele that Romeo was brainwashed,then Mele cured Romeo. Suddenly Mele and Romeo saved the day.