Writing For An Audience

Francis - Sequel

Francis Pt 2

By Makayla

Previously…

The boat was found on shore the next day, empty but for the journal. On those pages were her frantic jottings, all written in her distinctive handwriting, all but the last page. When the journal was found, that page was still wet, and on it were four words, looking as if they'd been written quickly, with a muddy finger. 

They said, "I did knock first."

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The boat was found, a huge investigation was started. Many police departments tried looking for Francis but didn’t succeed. So Detective Phoenix was put on the case. There were not much evidence but still it was enough for Detective Phoenix to use. Francis’s family were devastated, they just couldn’t believe it. 

“When did you last see Miss Francis Brandywine?” Detective Phoenix asked. 

“Last night sh...she was sleeping in the tent with us, and then we woke up to find her miss….missing” 

Francis’s mum cried. 

“Do you still have the rowboat in reach” Detective Phoenix asked, 

“Yes it’s over there” 

the dad said.

Detective Phoenix went to take a look at the boat. He checked if there were any false malfunctions. He saw there was nothing wrong, so he decided to hop into the boat and row out to where Francis had experienced this situation. Once he was in the right spot he waited. Nothing happened and he got curious so he decided to row back in to give in his findings. He got back to shore and head off back to the police department, he explained his findings and then did some research on the park.

He read a huge heap of articles when suddenly he came across a article explaining the death of a girl named Abigail Hellowell. She was drowned by her father at the age of seven in the Quetico lake, and now she is known for haunting the park and it’s area. He was startled from his findings and thought he should check the park again.

He pulled into the parking lot of Quetico park and looked around for any weird  activity. He decided to row the boat out to the middle of the lake once again. He stayed out the for about ten minutes. It was a long day for him and he was getting tired so he decided to lay down. He was starting to drift away when suddenly he heard loud knocks “BANG BOOM BAM” he jumped. 

He was so terrified and started to row his boat into shore wasn’t moving a bit. He was concerned and took a glare into the water he noticed there was the same boy from the article in the reflection of the water. 

“Ahhhhh” He Yelled. 

He tried and tried to row himself back to shore but wasn’t moving a bit. He noticed that the boat was sinking and tried to scream for help but no one heard him and he sobbed he felt a hand grab him and pull him into the water. 

“NOOOO help, please” He yelled and before he knew it he had sunk to the bottom of the lake.

The End

How To Prepare For Cross Country

Have you ever participated in a school Cross Country before? I’ve participated in a lot of Cross Countries, and they weren’t exactly easy. I will be telling you a couple of ways to prepare for a Cross Country.

The first way is to have a healthy diet. For example, you need to eat a lot of healthy food and drink heaps of water. This will help against your performance. Drinking heaps of water and eating healthy will help you heaps. This is because water will keep you hydrated while running, so you will be able to run longer and have an outstanding performance. Also eating a lot of healthy food helps with your muscles all over your body and contains a lot of vitamins.

Another way is to Pace Yourself. Pacing yourself will help you while running because it will help you by being at the right pace for you. So when you're running you be at your own pace, so then you will be feeling good and not over challenged. I like pacing myself because then it helps me go at my own pace and it helps me while running.

The Last way is to Mentally Prepare yourself. You should Mentally Prepare yourself because so you will think well while running and you will be self-encouraged. For example, you can tell yourself inspirational quotes like, “Come on you can do it” or “Keep going we’re nearly there”. I think mentally preparing yourself will help you heaps because it will build up your self-esteem while running.

I hope you do well in your school Cross Country. So I hope these ways help you prepare for your school cross country. It certainly helped me. Don’t forget to try your best and never give up.

"Being famous and/or rich would make me happy"

Statement!
Being Famous and/ or Rich Would Make Me Happy

I partly agree with being famous and/or rich would make me happy at certain times, because it’s not all the time where well known people love their life. Like sometimes I can be happy because I’ve done something good or helpful.

And other times it won’t make me happy because at times I might get bombarded by paparazzi, and that wouldn’t be good because their might be a terrorist and that would be dangerous. So it depends on what is happening.
Is being famous and rich really great??

How A Cheetah Got Their Spots

How A Cheetah Got Their Spots
By Makayla

One day the mighty and fast cheetah was running around the huge and dull safari when he saw his rival, The fierce tiger. The tiger and cheetah had a ultimate stare off, then Cheetah and Tiger had ran straight. Right before Cheetah was gonna hit Tiger, Tiger dodged. Then he boosted away.

“Oof” Cheetah said. He got up but Tiger had already disappeared. Cheetah slowly started to stroll back to his den, while he was walking back Tiger and his human friend leaped out behind Cheetah and tied him tightly to a tree “Hey get me off here” Cheetah growled. While Cheetah was stuck to the tree Tigers human friends.

Tigers human friend was trying to wind Cheetah up so he started painting random dots on him it wasn’t working so the human got some of his other friends and painted dots on him Cheetah got so angry he pulled and pulled against the rope and fell, just then all the humans dropped their paintbrushes and ran so when Cheetah fell he had dots from the paintbrushes. He was furious, He got up and let out a great big roar. Since then Cheetah has had dots all over him.

Revolting Tales "Little Red Riding Hood"

Big Bad got to his lair/house. “Ok, ok what should I do with you? Should I eat you raw or cook you?” Big Bad thought. “No you’re not. Jack will come and get me don’t worry!” She said sharply. Big Bad got very angry from that so he grabbed her an bit head off. Just then Jack came “Little Red Riding Hood!!!!!” Jack screamed, Big Bad looked at Jack and then chucked him into the fire. “Kids these days, so cheeky” Big Bad said. Since then there was no more Jack and Little Red Riding Hood.

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Benefits Of Exercise - Lyrics

This task I had to find a well known song and create my own lyrics, but there's a twist. I have to create my own lyrics so that it explains the benefits of exercise. My song I did was Believer (By Imagine Dragons). I haven't quite finished it yet but this is what I came up with.
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First things first

I'ma say all the words inside my head

I'm fired up and tired of the way that things have been, oh ooh

The way that things have been, oh ooh

Second thing second

Don't you tell me what you think that I can be

I'm the one at the sail, I'm the master of my sea, oh ooh

The master of my sea, oh ooh

I was broken from a young age

Taking my sulking to the masses

Write down my poems for the few

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First things first

I’ma tell you how to stay fit and healthy

You need to exercise and eat healthy food, (Ooooo)

Eat healthy food, (Ooooo)

Second thing second 

Physical exercise can vitalise your body

Fitness reduces risks of death from cardiovascular disease (Ooooo)

cardiovascular disease (Ooooo)

I was overweight from a young age

Taking my hunger to the bottom

Write down poems for the few

Benefits Of Exercise On The Brain

This is my presentation about, benefits of exercise on the brain. Our goal was to use various methods to take notes and represent our thinking.

Personification

Play Task

Current Events - White Kiwi Misses Birthday Due To Infection

How does a plane fly?

Free Writing - Hunt For The Herd

The fawn was left behind and the jaguars and deer's were very far away. The fawn finally stood up but was badly damaged. The deer was grieving in pain as one of his legs were badly grazed. The fawn tried to walk and look for some help so that he can heal his leg and get back to his herd.

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