Little Red riding hood - Twist

Walt: retell a story with a significant twist

Far far away in a lovely village, there lived a big bad girl. She loves playing outside with  people. She had a blue ribbon on the top of her ponytail,she also wears a blue dress with white frills on the arms of her dress. she wished she had someone to play with but she was all alone.

Suddenly she saw Little Red Riding Wolf  that was wearing a nice rose red cape that covered her back,she was walking with some bones to take to her careful grandma,suddenly big bad girl jumped out of the bush and said, “Ahhhh”. ”where are you going”. “I’m going to drop off some bones for my grandma”. “will you play with me first”,”sorry but I have to drop these bones off” said little red riding wolf.

“but why” said big bad girl, “I have not time that is why” said little red riding wolf. So then little red riding wolf went to grandmas house. “hello grandma” said little red riding wolf. “oh hello darling”, “grandma I have some bones for you” said little red riding wolf. “thank you dear these bones look yummy”. “your welcome” said little red riding wolf.

“How small teeth you have grandma” said little red riding wolf “How small eyes you have” grandma, said little red riding wolf. “How small hands you have” said little red riding wolf. Then suddenly out jumped big bad girl “ ahhh” said little red riding wolf. “Please don’t be scared I just want to play” said big bad girl, “Help Help” “grandma”, said little red riding wolf “yes I’m in the closet”.

Suddenly big bad girl’s Mother came “Young lady get here right now” “ what do you think you are doing” said the mother, “ go home now you're grounded” said mum. “Sorry about that sometimes she gets crazy”, “ that’s ok” “ what do you say” said mum, “Sorry I only wanted to play”. “Oh you should've said”. Then they lived happily ever after.

The End

Task Description:
We had to write the story Little Red Riding Hood with a twist. We had a 10 minute timer to write each paragraph. We had to check our sentences and punctuation so our paragraphs was right.